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Devious Collection...Poetry...Story by TriciaS


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Listen to the silence

Corrupting the innocence



Savour its taste

Awaken its craze



Go and feel the sound of emptiness

Stuttering calmness

Makes my blood boil

Tightening thrill

Gets my nerves straight

            in the realization of my Loneliness.
sometimes loneliness/boredom makes you do something you might regret.
so stop while you still can..or think twice before you do it.
when i wrote this there is something terrible/horrible about it which i don't know, you judge...
"idle hands are the devil's workshop"
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j0rosa Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
sometimes 'silence' say a thousand words :love:
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willyamPax Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
maraming salamat idol....
yes....i agree silence indeed says a thousand words...
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CorradoCandido Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Dark silence
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willyamPax Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yes...dark silence indeed...
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SaphiqueX13 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I have to say, I'm starting to love dark poetry. This one in particular is well written. The simplicity makes it very easy to understand, yet there's so much more emotion behind it!
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willyamPax Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yes its something more....thanks, i appreciate your great feedback...
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InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is gorgeous:) very well written. Thank you for posting your work.
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willyamPax Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks you for the complements ...i appreciate that...
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InkStainedPens Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you are welcome:)
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TriciaS Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012
Wow!!!!The devil finds work for idle hands.......The first thing I thought of ....!!........and I hadn't read what you had said Willyam!!
This makes me think so many things ...but mainly this...Is the girl just in the wrong place ....she shouldn't be standing there ..alone and vunerable! I'm the watcher at the moment...but is there another watcher ....?????....
...This is my only thought at the moment as yet another child has gone missing.....Our news is just full of missing children ....sometimes found dead...usually never found!.....
Some brilliant comments on your other site Willyam!:clap:
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