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Cruel Friend

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I hate it when reality struck us with something so disturbing
Cruelty against our trusted friend
Suffering in every direction
Trust and bond is lost in the sea of fear
Maybe it's just the balance of nature
       That something deep inside us is just too cruel
       There are some people are just bad in nature
       Yet we can't change the nature of life's beings
       Still we stand and defend what is right
       We trim down the bad characteristics
       And stop them from being free to spread its bad nature
That's life
       it's not perfect
       it's half good and half bad
We can't change those facts
But we can prevent it
Justice and good hearted person
       is always here to make it happen
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author's note:
its was supposed to be part of my first poem about friendship,
but it didnt co inside the preview image so i submitted it separately.
here is the first one: [link]
this is about animal cruelty.
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laurotica's avatar
I like this. A lot. The language is rich, and I enjoyed how you've formatted selected parts. My favourite line has to be:
That's life
it's not perfect
it's half good and half bad

Well done :clap: